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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

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Whether reading books can improve more
imagination
 and
language
 skills than
others
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others, such
such
 as watch TV, some people think it can. Personally,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 think reading books can develop those skills better. Nowadays, it is heatedly debated whether reading books can improve more
imagination
 and
language
 skills. Some people believe The main reason is that reading books
requires
Suggestion
require
 people imagining the actual scenes to follow the plots which are presented by words
instead
 of images.
For example
, plenty of movies which are adopted from famous books are judged by the people who read the books, because the movies are
showed
Suggestion
shown
 by visual with the details that might not be described in the books, and those details are imagined differently in each other’s minds.
As a result
, reading book needs to use imaginations of the whole picture, which is a way to train
this
 skill.
In addition
, reading
itself which
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itself, which
 is an important part of
language
 skills, which can support others,
such
 as writing, by absorbing the new words and the understanding of difficult sentences. Compared with movies or TV, books contain more information due to the reason that books need to describe not only the conversation but
also
 the environment and the coherence between plots.
However
, in movies and tv, everything is presented by sound and vision, so there is no need to use any imaginations or readings.
Therefore
, reading books can provide more chance of training the skill of
imagination
 and
language
 to improve them. In summary, I believe reading books
is
Suggestion
are
 a better way to improve
imagination
 and
language
 skills than TV.
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