Some people believe that our happiness depend on how much money we have. Others say that ‘money cannot buy happiness.’ Do you think that having money is the key to happiness, or are there more important factors?

It is argued that

happiness

is dependent on the amount of

money

we have. But others believe that

money

is the key lead to

happiness

. I agree with

this

idea, but not completely.

Money

plays a significant role in our lives. It is obvious that we need

money

to pay for bills and buy essentials.

In addition

, we can use

money

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the money

to buy luxuries which we love,

such

as fashionable clothes in a special occasion or cinema tickets to entertain together with family and friends.

Therefore

, I believe that the more

money

we have for a good standard of living the more comfortable and cheerful we are.

For instance

, Bill Gates is a billionaire who founded Microsoft. His present life is affluence and comfortable with a smartest house in the world, monumental private aircraft and massive

supercar

collection.

Nevertheless

,

money

is not the only factor to lead to

happiness

. For someone, they have a great family and some good friends who raise them up when they fail so they are happy. Others said that they look for

happiness

through some works which contribute to

community

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the community

, especially help unlucky people and the old. To me, I very cheerful and comfortable when I have many great comic books and watch television all my free time without

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complaints

complaining

from my parents.

Therefore

, there can be many factors that create

happiness

. In conclusion, in my point of view, having a huge amount of

money

is a great

thing

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thing, however

however

it is not the single factors which contribute to

happiness

. Everyone is

different so

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different, so

the key to

happiness

of each person is different.