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In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household chores. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give relevant examples.

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The modern world which we live in today requires
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 men and women to
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 in order to survive. Women and men in many countries
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 a full-time job and they have to help each to complete
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 chores which are essential part of our
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 to
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 life. Men and women
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 get equal chance to
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 and have their freedom of speech, but usually women tend to do all the
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 chores on their own which is completely unfair.
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, if
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 men and women start sharing all the
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 chores amongst each other it would be a fair thing to do. I personally believe that
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 chores are not only meant for women so men have to take equal part in it. It is true that men and women need to
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 full-time in order to survive and sharing the
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 chores help each other not to stress out. When a
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 chores are concerned picking up of grocery would be considered as important things to do and along with that doing the laundry and dishes. Men should
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 learn how to cook so that they can cook on time meal which essential in daily life. Just like men, even women will have to do the
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 chores and support men in every way, at the same ensuring they themselves not doing all the chores. By men and women supporting each other it would eventually save time for
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 which they can use in a better way and can use for a better task and
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 more efficiently. In conclusion, just like working is important in today’s world, even doing
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 chores are important and by sharing them equally among each other would be the most logical thing to do, men can help women by doing few important chores and woman can help by doing little more. In my opinion the most effective way of dividing chores between men and women would be by doing chores without having said, means doing their own part with mutual understanding, which will eventually help achieve what everyone wants in their life which is being happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender equality
  • Household chores
  • Dual-income families
  • Work-life balance
  • Traditional gender roles
  • Division of labor
  • Egalitarian
  • Mental well-being
  • Societal attitudes
  • Efficiency
  • Domestic responsibilities
  • Cultural norms
  • Upbringing
  • Role models
  • Familial dynamics
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