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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is a known fact, that crime rate has been increasing exponentially in many cities. Some people argue that it is because of the exposure provided by films and television,
hence
 public is coming up with innovative ideas of committing crimes.
On the other hand
, directors and script writers state that the story is based on
true incident
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a true incident
true incidents
 from the society. While, the topic is debatable,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that, unless there is no harm to the society, variety of scripts
needs
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need
 to be encouraged in film or television industry. From ages,
public
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the public
 has the habit of blaming
media
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the media
 or films, for happenings across the world.
Plethora
Suggestion
A plethora
 of movies not only entertain us but
also
 provide us information regarding technology, science, different cultures. Horror or violence is just an another genre of movie, and is
upto
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up to
 the individual's interest to watch them or not. Mankind definitely worships films and television, so there is a slight chance that people might get motivated from them, but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 do not see it as the sole reason for violence in the community.
On the other hand
,
government
Suggestion
the government
 is anyway taking measures to decrease violence in films using censor board approvals. Since mankind inspires from the actions of
super heroes
a fictional character with special powers used for heroic purposes
superheroes
, films are making sure to
embibe
take in, also metaphorically
imbibe
 rich values in their role.
Moreover
, violent films increase adrenaline rush for the people who watch them, in turn keeping them active. I would like to conclude saying that, people not only get inspired from films but
also
 from several situations in real life too. It is always beneficial to view films as
source
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a source
 of entertainment in
this
 stressful world.
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