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How important is it for individuals and countries to think about future, rather than to focus on the present?

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Despite the fact that the matter of the coming
time
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 has not caught the attention as frequently as other issues, it does not mean it is less vital. One can subscribe to a notion that it is vital for nations and citizens to focus on the
future
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 not the current
time
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. As far as I am concerned, there are several reasons which will witness why people need to think about the
time
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 ahead.
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 of all, the most important reason is the population. It is recognized that the mortality rate is
alleviating
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alleviated
 and the span of life as well as the living standard is increasing, especially for the elderly who need the support from governments and authorities. If only today
is looked
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is looking
looks
 into and no planning is done tomorrow, the crime and violence will have bad impacts on the society and people have to suffer.
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, relations with other countries should
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 be sustained. After all, we are living in a well-connected global village today. Apart from it, the
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 reason that countries should plan for the
future
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is that if wise
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if that is wise
 spending is done today, it might save a lot later on.
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, if countries do screening tests for early detection of certain cancers
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 as skin cancer or breast cancer, it will save not only a lot of expensive treatments but
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 treating
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time
objective case of they
them
.
As a result
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, it has been well said that – A stitch in
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 saves nine.
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, the economy is one of the
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reasons
 the governments should pay attention in the
future
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. It is evident that some
countries see
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countries, see
 a decline in the financial resources due to the fact that people have to pay for different taxes
such
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 as electricity, water, gases, and others. So, the authorities should mitigate the amount of money of the taxes which their citizens need to deal with in order to maintain the economic development. In the light of the facts, it is imperative that every country plan wisely for the
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. If countries plan well for the
time
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 ahead, people would have a better tomorrow.

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