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Talk about a person who you wanted to become like while growing up. Who is the person? How do you know him? Why do you want to become like him?

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Introduction
I have been inspired by many people in my
life
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 due to their habits and ways of living
life
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. There are many people in my
life
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 who have had
exemplary conduct
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an exemplary conduct
 and principles of leading
life
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. They have set a good example for me and
also
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 guided me onto the right path at all times. Among these people my paternal uncle’s contribution is unforgettable.
Body paragraph 1
My uncle is an upstanding citizen who has led his
life
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 with honesty and gratitude. As a high ranking army
officer he
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officer, he
 has always taken wise decisions pertaining to his official duties and as a family man. The basic values of humanity and the importance of education are always the crux of his teachings. He is about to retire from his job and leads a peaceful
life
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 with contentment and satisfaction.
Body paragraph 2
From my childhood, he has given me his affection and
mentorship
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 with strictness. He gave me guidance every step of the way, taught me moral values through practical lessons and real-
life
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 examples. He has
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 helped me with my studies and helped me make important decisions in
life
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.
Conclusion
Growing up, I learned a lot from his actions and from what he had to say. I admire and respect him the most and consider him to be my role model due to his
uncompromised
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 honesty and integrity. I wish to follow in his footsteps and have tried to imbibe all the values and the positivity that his personality exudes. I believe that everyone should have a role model who teaches them the art of living.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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