Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, there is a controversy whether zoos should be closed down because of cruelty.
Although
some people are of opinion that zoos are integral places, which help threaten animals to survive and prevent extinction. From my own perspective, I totally agree that the shortcomings overshadow advantages and zoos should be closed down. There
are
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is
some reason why zoos are useful
thus
far.
First
of all, because of climate change and human overpopulation, wild habitats are harmful and limited. Loss of habitats causes
number
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a number
the number
of endangered animal species decreasing significantly and dying out in nearby day.
Hence
,
zoo
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the zoo
is an artificial
habitats which
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habitat, which
habitat which
is created for animal conservation. In fact, zoos
are provided
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provide
plenty of high-tech equipment and managed by trained staff.
Therefore
, endangered animals can be cured by quality medication and escaped from extinction via captive breeding.
Moreover
, zoos are the places where for people to visit for entertainment and education about
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
,
such
as: number of wild animal species, animal’s nutrient pyramids, habitat condition.
Nevertheless
, it is true that most zoos currently use cruel treatments to manage their cages. Despite preserving the wild animals in
artificial environment
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an artificial environment
artificial environments
, lots of animals tend to suffer in the confines and constantly live in psychological pressure.
As a result
, numerous wild animal species become extinct in the artificial environment which is called “zoo” and it turn out to be belied the purpose of
zoo
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zoos
the zoo
.
Furthermore
, enhancing the knowledge about
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
is not prevalent reason for visiting the zoo. Most of people are
enjoyable
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enjoying
due to animal abuse.
For example
, many people throw objects into the cages and animals,
such
as: redundant food, rubbish. To sum up, animals should be
protected but
Accept comma addition
protected, but
does not have to be in zoos. Zoos are cruel to animals and they should be closed down.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • animal welfare
  • conservation
  • captive breeding
  • habitat
  • ethical issues
  • zoochosis
  • endangered species
  • genetic diversity
  • reintroduction programs
  • wildlife education
  • sanctuary
  • natural living conditions
  • artificial environments
  • behavioral enrichment
  • ecosystem
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