Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A myriad of individuals deem that celebrities are worthy to be paid a huge amount of money, while
other
think that they are not well deserve all plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
this
money .
I am convinced that there are priorities to be done, Accept space
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thus
authorities should shift their priority
to essential tasks rather than complimentary tasks Suggestion
priorities
such
as entertainment jobs. This
essay will investigate the both view and their causes.
For one view, there is a negative impact of entertainment on
the country, which includes financial burden and superficial mindsSuggestion
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Entertainment professions tend to be fund draining professions, Accept space
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although
we really need for financial support to improve many primary sectors ,
the authorized persons squander the national's budget for unnecessary issues. Accept space
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Moreover
, level
of Suggestion
the level
levels
publics
' awareness is decliningSuggestion
public
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because of imitation of negative sides of artists. Egypt has become top leading countryAccept space
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which has the largest rate of hepatitis C virus and cancer. Accept space
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This
is explained that entertaining fields should be no longer existed with nearly evanescence
of backbone services, that are absolutely vital for any human being Suggestion
the nearly evanescence
such
as health and education.
Another view, a lot of public figures merit large quantities of money, due to the influential role that they are doing in positive representing
our historical greatness, culture identity and supporting poor and needy people. As far as I recall there are many of actors immortalize the historical memories through movies, documentaries and seriesAccept comma addition
positive, representing
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therefore
these works are a symbol of Eastern civilization. In addition
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there are some celebrities who participate in several charitable affairs and took part in caring for marginalized classesAccept space
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For example
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Angelina Jolie has taken part in rescuing Accept space
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enormous number
of refugees in several areas around the world. In light of Suggestion
an enormous number
this
, it will be excluded that public figures have a massive role in improvement
and sacrificing more than they earned.
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there are negatives and positives of providing a lot of wages for artistsAccept space
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however
nation may in need for the majority of budget
in reformsSuggestion
the budget
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As far as I know there is no nation make the Accept space
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first
priority such
as complimentary works and it can have its own renaissance
the revival of learning and culture
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Finally
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I may recommend that high priority issues should acquire the entire concern until the desired stability achievedAccept space
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