Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A myriad of individuals deem that celebrities are worthy to be paid a huge amount of money, while

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I am convinced that there are priorities to be done,

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as entertainment jobs.

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Entertainment professions tend to be fund draining professions,

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we really need for financial support to improve many primary sectors

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the authorized persons squander the national's budget for unnecessary issues.

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because of imitation of negative sides of artists. Egypt has become top leading country

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which has the largest rate of hepatitis C virus and cancer.

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is explained that entertaining fields should be no longer existed with

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the nearly evanescence

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as health and education. Another view, a lot of public figures merit large quantities of money, due to the influential role that they are doing in

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positive, representing

our historical greatness, culture identity and supporting poor and needy people. As far as I recall there are many of actors immortalize the historical memories through movies, documentaries and series

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there are some celebrities who participate in several charitable affairs and took part in caring for marginalized classes

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Angelina Jolie has taken part in rescuing

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an enormous number

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and sacrificing more than they earned. To recapitulate

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there are negatives and positives of providing a lot of wages for artists

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I may recommend that high priority issues should acquire the entire concern until the desired stability achieved

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