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Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about the betterment of seeking advice from other individuals or from the Internet. While I agree that
Internet
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the Internet
 provides us with a wide range of
information
 in a fraction of time, I believe experts are the best option when it comes to matters of
life
 and death. On the one hand, the Internet and e-books therein have been filled with real-
life
 experiences which can be considered as a solution for some specific problems.
This
 is because many share their knowledge about all aspects of
life
 ranging from employing different methods of nurturing a child to repairing top-of-the-range appliances with
fewer
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less
little
 money. Since
such
information
 can be obtained by clicking on a button or tapping on a mobile screen, many people regard it as an efficient way of gaining other peoples’ experience.
On the other hand
, I believe some piece of knowledge must be acquired not from the Internet but from special
experts
skillfulness by virtue of possessing special knowledge
expertise
.
This
 is because not all
information
 available online can be applied to all humans and a piece of advice may vary from person to person.
For example
, there are many STD’s (Sexually-transmitted diseases) with a common initial symptom.
However
, not all of them can be treated with antibiotics.
Thus
, it is clear that almost all medical advice on the Internet can be misleading not because it has no academic backgrounds but because it may misunderstand the user. In conclusion, I believe the Internet is the best choice to share and gain hands-on experiences.
Nevertheless
, it may cost someone’s
life
 if the user misapply the
information
 on his or her
life
.

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