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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living or working in that country. To what extend do you agree?

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Learning a new
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 from textbooks and applying grammar rules, which are the essence, but not necessarily enough. Using it with a native speaker is what ensures
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fluency
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. I strongly concur with the need for an extensive period of the
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 used in context.    To start with, using the
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 is a skill you can acquire, which is crucial to understand the cultural aspect of a country, but it is not enough without living a couple of months and
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 it with
locals
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the locals
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, in Italy, people there
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 their non-verbal to express themselves.
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 you will be using the appropriate verbs or sentence structure, but not enough to fluently speak the Italian dialect without using hand gestures.
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, living and communicating with citizens is essential to have a natural flow of
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.    Another reason for the need to
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 the
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 in the original country over a period, which gives the opportunity to
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 the correct terminologies in context, permit gaining
fluency
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. To illustrate
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, being able to
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 the
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 to purchase your daily products or using it in a professional setting by using the appropriate word aids in verbal
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.
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 socializing on a daily basis allows better acquisition of verbal communication.    In conclusion, I strongly agree that culture builds an excellent way to
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 the appropriate word in a situation
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 better than that taken from any course. Living in a region that uses that
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 you will know and understand how people
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 their native words in their daily life.
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, using the correct word in context while daily communication a key to ensuring
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fluency
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.

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