People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?

Today, numerous people are struggling to keep a balance between
work
and
life
. In
this
essay, I aim to explore
this
complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, and bring some effective measures. To my maid, an arrange of factors contribute to their failure.
Firstly
, it is employers and companies that are to blame. They always focus on how to maximize corporate profits, but ignore their employees. An unreasonable job arrangement often leads them dead beat, because they have to
work
overtime to finish the task.
Secondly
, the high living pressure force citizens to
work
the longer time for increasing income. The high inflation rate makes civic
life
harder and harder.
Therefore
, many people need to
work
harder,
for example
, they take two jobs at one or earn overtime allowance to support their family living cost.
Finally
, intense competition leads workers to strive for self-improvement.
Thus
, many people use their rest or family time for studying and training to keep them competitive in the office. The problems need a cooperation of individuals and society to overcome.
To begin
with, bosses and enterprises should plan a better arrangement of their employers'
work
and try to avoid taking up their personal time as much as possible.
In addition
, governments and organisations could provide more help and benefits for citizens to decrease their
life
stresses.
For instance
, the organisation might increase staff welfare, and the authorities should take more measures to control inflation.
Lastly
, as an individual, a reasonable schedule of
work
and
life
would bring them more competitiveness, while only a career's
life
is not complete. In conclusion, inhuman
work
arrangements, high inflation rate and cut-throat competition are the consequences of most people are hard to achieve the
work
-
life
balance.
Thus
, in order to address
this
problem, both societies and individuals should make an effort.

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