Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

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There are various museums and galleries who
charge
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the entry
fee
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while there are others who did not
charge
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anything. Both have
there
of them or themselves
their
own pros and cons, in case of entry ticket there will be a minimum or selected people who enter the museums and galleries
alongwith
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along with
that people can enjoy more while
embrassing
the act of clasping another person in the arms (as in greeting or affection)
embracing
the
art
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or
scluptures
a three-dimensional work of plastic art
sculptures
. Whereas on the
otherside
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other side
by not charging any money
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mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
museum
and
art
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galleries expect a great footfall and the chances of
sale
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the sale
a sale
of
art
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works are high. I personally agree that benefits of charging entrance
fee
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outweigh the drawbacks. To start with, the events which
invloves
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involve
involves
cost can only be
bear
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borne
born
by those who are truly interested in the
ocassion
an event that occurs at a critical time
occasion
action
or place,
moreover
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it
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also ignore
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also ignores
the unnecessary people. To exemplify,
Art
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is understood by the limited people and it is a niche market and
art
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of renowned artist were
diplayed
place troops or weapons in battle formation
deployed
displayed
delayed
, so by charging
reasonable management
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a reasonable management fee
fee
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helps to attract the crowd with the specific
mind set
a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
.
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, museums and
art
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galleries are the
souce
the place where something begins, where it springs into being
source
sources
souls
of learning and inspiration and it should be valued by the people who visit
such
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places by charging
nominal
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nominal fees
a nominal fee
fee
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can help them to use those funds for maintenance expenditure.
For example
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: In
delhi
a city in north central India
Delhi
there is a Doll and rail
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mueseums
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masons'
museums
who
charge
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fee
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fees
which is economical and can be borne by anyone, the management use that money for maintaining the objects and building.
However
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, there are
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mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
and
art
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galleries who did not
charge
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any
fee
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which helps them attract
alot
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a lot
of crowd results in promoting the artist and the galleries at an alarming rate.
For example
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, more and more people visit the place will
definetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
communicate and
shre
have in common
share
shares
shared
their experience with others which help in branding and promotion.
In addition
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to
this
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, by not charging any
fee
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it can be affordable for all
class
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classes
of people which gives the sense
on
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of
equality.
For instance
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, the children who are from the below poverty line family can
also
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explore and learn from the
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mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
museum
like science
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mueseums
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
museum
. To conclude and in my opinion, everything has its value so charging a
fee
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to enter certain
palces
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
places
pieces
like these
is
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are
fair and valid.
Definitely
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Defines
the advantages outweigh the
disavantages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
because only limited people having same interest can enter and communicate and with collection of amount the maintenance of the
scluptures
a three-dimensional work of plastic art
sculptures
, building, and
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art work
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artwork
can be done.

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