Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

It g
enerally argue
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generally argues
is generally argued
that parent can make their own decision of immunizing their children or not immunizing children from deadly diseases. In
this
view, Childhood vaccines or immunizations can seem overwhelming with parent. From my perspective, it must not to optional and all children are o
bligate
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obligated
to v
accinated.
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vaccinate
This
essay will discuss the benefits of
vaccine
injection and the major of
vaccine
in society. Parents want to do everything possible to make sure their children are healthy and protected from preventable diseases. Vaccinations not only protect children from fatal diseases,
such
as polio, chickenpox, and diphtheria, but they
also
keep other children safe by eliminating or greatly decreasing dangerous diseases that used to spread from child to child.
For instance
, according to P
h.
(from potential of Hydrogen) the logarithm of the reciprocal of hydrogen-ion concentration in gram atoms per liter; provides a measure on a scale from 0 to 14 of the acidity or alkalinity of a solution (where 7 is neutral and greater than 7 is more basic and less than 7 is more acidic);
pH
D. Vivian Chou, Rubella had a massive number of people who b
eing infected
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were infected
been infected
have been infected
in 1969.
However
, the number is dropdown dramatically after the licensing of the rubella
vaccine
. As a society, it is important to protect human from deadly diseases. The more people who are vaccinated, the fewer opportunities a
disease
has spread. While vaccines are very effective at preventing
disease
, no medication is 100% effective. Fortunately, most people who get vaccinated do get full protection from
disease
.
However
, a very small percentage of people who are vaccinated may not get full immunity from the
vaccine
and may still be vulnerable if exposed to
d
isease.
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the disease
On the other hand
, some anti-vaccinationist believe in the immune system and natural remedies.
For example
, In China, there are many villages are following the natural medicines to cure illnesses. In summary, vaccination should be compulsory for all children and government should enforce a new policy to support
vaccine
injection.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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