There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeated driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages?

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The increased influx of cars on the
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is leading to more
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mishaps. Lawmakers are prescribing regular driving exam to curb the situation as single
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is not serving the purpose. In my opinion, driving exam at regular intervals will keep the drivers skill of driving updated, along with his/ her knowledge of traffic rules and regulation.
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will bring with itself some necessary drawbacks, like corruption at
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level. Testing of driving skills and knowledge of updated
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regulation has multiple advantages to the
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.
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, the driver has to keep himself/ herself acquainted with all updates of traffic regulations,
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as how driving while talking over mobile phone, is being treated.
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, if driving skills are tested at regular intervals, the authorities will be in a much better position to judge whether, the drivers current skills are,
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enough, to allow them to
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at present city traffic conditions. As much as, drivers might not like the
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, but if implemented properly, the regular
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module will help to keep
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accidents to check, to substantial level.
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good or advantageous any
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is, it is bound along certain pitfalls alongside. To put out the main drawback of the regular
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, it is imperative to discuss the issue of corruption that will spread its fangs. Drivers to successfully pass the driving
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will start offering bribe to testing officials.
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,
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the integrity of the officials may be, sooner or later someone, somewhere will give in to the temptation of accepting the bribe. Post same slowly it will spread throughout the testing official’s fraternity, rendering the
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as
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as redundant. All in all, it is safe to conclude, in light of what has been discussed above that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of regular
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for good. Any new regulation will always come with both benefits and drawbacks, it is for us to how, the
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is implemented and how we are abiding by it.
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