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Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them other scientist think that it is a bad idea and would be dangerous discuss both the view and give your opinion ?

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Some scientist
argue
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argues
 that there is a
life
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 on other planets and it is good to send
massages
a communication (usually brief) that is written or spoken or signaled
messages
 to
contact
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 them while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 scientist believe that these kind of activities have disastrous consequences. In my opinion, trying to interact with
life
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 form on another
planet
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 may have
negative impact
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a negative impact
 on human
life
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.
Accept space
.
 Some scientist think that contacting on other planets is
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
. If human beings can
contact
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 them, their resources can be utilized for the
batterment
a change for the better; progress in development
betterment
 of human
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life
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life, for
for example
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, human population is increasing and natural resources
are goes
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are going
are gone
 on decreasing if we get alternative energy source from them so that we can improve our
life
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.
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, some
reasercher
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
 think that it is harmful for us to
contact
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 on another
planet
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for example
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, if people can
contact
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 them there are so many chances of getting
attack
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attacked
 on
Earth
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 by
estrangers
anyone who does not belong in the environment in which they are found
strangers
.
Moreover
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, they can
missuse
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miss use
 our technology by
implement
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implementing
 on their
planet
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, there is no need to
contact
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estrangers
anyone who does not belong in the environment in which they are found
strangers
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 it is not necessary that they can help us.Many other living beings on
earth
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 are under threat of
extinction as
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extinction, as
 human beings are superior to them.
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,
extra terrestrial
originating or located or occurring outside Earth or its atmosphere
extraterrestrial
 beings may wipe out human beings from the
earth
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.
Moreover
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, great scientists
such
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 as Stephen Hawking have already given us warning against interaction with
life
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 forms on other planets. Human beings can live happily on
this
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planet
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 if they utilize natural resources wisely
instead
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 of exploiting them. There is no need to search for resources from
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
planet
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 when there is no guarantee that they can help human species. To conclude that, in my opinion,
realationship
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
relationships
 with the
life
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 on other planets may have
negative effect
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a negative effect
 on
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earth it
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earth, it
 is better to use the
reasource
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
 on
earth
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wisly
in a wise manner
wisely
Wesley
 and live here happily
instade
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of trying to reach on
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 planets.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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