Science will soon make it possible for people to live until 100 years, perhaps even to 200 years. Some people think that this would be a good thing. Others think that it would cause many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the near future scientists will extend the possibility of human survival up to 2 centuries. While some hold the opinion that

this

is a positive development, others believe it is a catastrophic one.

This

essay will discuss both these views followed by a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, many argue that a long

life

will come with many health repercussions. Owing to the fragility of the human body, it was only designed to sustain 70 or so years of

life

Therefore

, many health ramifications may

arise

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arise, such

such

as heart

disease

, autoimmune diseases and infections. Which may affect older bodies on a larger scale,

this

is because, as we grow

older our

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older, our

bodies become less equipped to dealing with

disease

because they lose essential cells and body functions that usually combat

disease

For instance

, the antibody ‘Human Leukotrine Factor 6’ decreased by 40% by the age of 45.

This

is an imperative bodily

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

mechanism in dealing with foreign bodies, without it bodies are more susceptible to

disease

However

, being able to live up to 200 years is without a doubt an incredibly positive development.

This

is because those that have spent the early years of their

life

working and securing financial stability, who have missed out on developing their person relationships can now have a chance to do so with no distractions and interruptions. To exemplify, Human Timeline research conducted by Harvard University demonstrated that ‘a 60 year old male or female spend 60% of their lives working, 30% asleep and 10 percent for personal relations.’ Prolonging human

life

gives us a chance to extend our personal relationships and deepen bonds. In conclusion,

although

there are many health complications that may arise from extending one’s

life

for so long, I believe they are worthwhile as people get to spend more time with their families and

further

explore their relationships and bonds.

Fri Aug 23 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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