Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say to be fully enjoyed they need to be seen in the cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Cinema or film is a form of media to entertain, which uses visual and hearing means as a medium to tell a story. Because of the availability of internet and many other means the
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experience is slowly being replaced by our mobiles, tablets, computers and many more. In my opinion, I prefer to go to a
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to watching it on a small
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in a big city like Bangalore costs a fortune and there is no need to describe about the traffic on the way to reach the
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, some movies which are available in 3-D and
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shot in Imax have higher video quality and takes our experience to a
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is watched on small
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day which will not affect our expectations regarding the film. On a whole, I prefer to watch
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regardless of the format of visual and with a crystal clear audio system though it costs me a bit more than the other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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