Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the world currently nations with extended working hours are far more economically prosperous when compared to those ones which lack it. Several people are bound to have differing views on

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topic.

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believe that proper management of longer working hours of the employees by all the companies of the

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along with the additional vacations and incentives given to them appropriately will lead to its better financial growth.

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Presently, various

companies are hiring their workers to

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for them for more than normal working hours. They are doing

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in order to have a beneficial annual

turnover which

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turnover, which

are in-turn advantageous for the

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.

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example numerous

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example, numerous

software businesses in Japan are paying extra money to their staff to

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overtime thereby improving the economic rate.

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conduct of the employers is not healthy at the individual level at the moment and may lead to the devastating future of the

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. According to the health sciences, an adult person can

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maximum

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a maximum

of 8 to 10 hours a day, making up to 40 to 50 hours per week and

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is medically proven to stay healthy. Any more hours of

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than

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may lead to severe mental breakdown and other health issues

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as depression

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continuing in the same way

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due to stress and continuous overload of

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. To avoid

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corporate supervisors can give their staff fair and equal breaks during their job

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as holidays, picnics, excursions and many other recreations.

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instance, my

cousin who is working in a multinational corporation is very healthy and satisfied mentally and financially by doing overtime as he gets paid extra and

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get ample amount of vacation to rejuvenate himself. Based on the elaborate discussion in the above paragraphs, I

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support the fact that the balanced blend of lengthy job timings with vacations will not only allow the citizens to

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healthily and satisfactorily for now for the

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but

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continue that in the future.