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should a nation invest in transportation? discuss both views ans express an opinion

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While some people may argue that an investment in transportation is a burden on the government, I am of the opinion that an putting funds into
buiding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
trnaference
 mechanisms is a win-win situation. Both views will be discussed in
this
 essay. To start with, building
quality network
Suggestion
a quality network
 of roads, rails and air transport schemes help attract foreign direct investments as well as enhance earnings from tourism.
For instance
, countries like
United Arab Emirates
Suggestion
the United Arab Emirates
 has and China have laid solid foundations in building robust systems of transportation that will stand the test of time.
Also
, Dubai airport has been adjudged the world's busiest destination,
thus
 contributing to the income generated from tourists.
On the contrary
, some other climes
have not been
Suggestion
were not
 able to develop in
this
 sector as they consider the huge cost of the infrastructures as a white goose chase.
However
, these funds could be raised via public private partnerships. Take
for instance
, the collaboration between the Dangote group and the Nigerian government.
Lastly
, the benefits accruing to solid transit schemes are enormous. These range from increased business presence to improved life expectancy for the citizenry. An example is the fact that people live longer in the United States of America as compared with Nigeria. In conclusion, everyone wins if the appropriate structures are put in place regarding the movement of people, goods and service, from one place to the other. It is my opinion that nations that budget huge amount of money into constructing state of the art transportation systems benefit today,
tommorrow
the day after today
tomorrow
 and beyond.
Thus it
Accept comma addition
Thus, it
 is safe to say that the return on these investments
never end
Suggestion
is never ending
. As
such
, the unborn generation will equally reap the fruits of today's labour.
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