It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that due to technological advances we will loose our traditional cultures.
Also
, it is given that we cannot have these together. This
essay disagrees that because of technology
we could loose
our fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
culture
. Firstly
, this
essay will address how technology
has evolved over time and what impact its
had on our it is
it's
culture
.
Technology
has grown over with time. Instead
of cycles, buses and cars have been replaced and telephones have been taken over by smartphones. Our world
has seen a lot of changes because of technology
in the past 50 years. A lot of traditional methods of communication have been changed because of technology
. Yes, it has had an impact on our lives but
it is unjustified to say that Accept comma addition
lives, but
technology
advances and cultures cannot go hand in hand. In fact, there are many examples where people have shown a variety of culture
to the world
with the help of technology
. For instance
, lets take social networking sites, these have progressed over the past few years and have billions of users, sites like youtube
and Suggestion
YouTube
instagram
are platforms for people to gain knowledge, learn new things and a source of entertainment. Many instragrammers
have travel accounts that show the tradition, culture
and heritage of different countries. Apart from this
, they have also
become a stage for raising awareness for any healthcare and human right issues.
Secondly
, it is very important for us to preserve our traditions and culture
. There are still many people in the world
who think our culture
is something that can never be taken away from us. Also
, there are still a vast majority of people who rather than reading news in front of the screen, prefer to read it in the newspaper. Culture
is also
one of the main aspects linked with boosting the tourism of a country. As we know, the tourism industry is extremely important to the government of a particular place not just because its
a means of earning for the it is
it's
economy but
it Accept comma addition
economy, but
also
creates awareness of culture
and shows it to the rest of the world
. Lets
take, Suggestion
Let's
for example
, hundreds of years ago people used to travel by small boats which required paddling to reach to islands
. It requires a lot of effort and stamina to Suggestion
the islands
paddle but
nowadays we can reach the same islands by using helicopters or electronic boats. Accept comma addition
paddle, but
Thus
, we can say that technology
has made it easier for us to travel and know more about the world
.
In conclusion, we can say that technology
does not hamper with our traditional culture
, but helps expand it by spreading knowledge about the same. This
essay has shown evidences
that we can have both things together and we need not be scared that our Suggestion
evidence
culture
will be lost. Also
, we should take more measures on our part to sustain our heritage and values.Submitted by namraimran1998 on
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