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good health care is a necessity for healthy living. what is your opinion on this ?

#health #care #necessity
There is a popular saying that
health
 is wealth. While some people may argue that good
health
care
 is not a determinant
for
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of
 healthy living, I am of the opinion that the quality of available
health
care
contribute
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contributes
tremendiously
extremely
tremendously
 to the well being of the populace.
This
 essay will discuss both views. My reasons are not far fetched.
Firstly
, medical facilities
are put
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put
is put
has put
puts
 in place to provide the required
care
 in the times of need.
For example
, about 30 percent of rural women in Nigeria die during childbirth
as a result
 of non availability of facilities which should have ensured regular antenatal and postnatal
care
.
Similarly
, there is a 27 percent death rate arising from road accidents in Nigeria
as a result
 of non availability of paramedics in most of the cities in the country.
In addition
, properly
equiped
provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate
equipped
diagonostic
concerned with diagnosis; used for furthering diagnosis
diagnostic
diagnostics
 laboratories help with an understanding of the
health
 condition of patients before the illness
get
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gets
 to advanced stages where it becomes difficult to curtail.
For instance
, 20 percent mortality rate for cancer patients in Malawi is attributable to late detection.
Conversely
, some folks are of the view that no matter how good hospitals schemes are, human beings are destined to die.
This
 spans from religious believes that death is compulsory for all mortals. An example is the fact that even the doctors who give
care
 to patients
also
 die eventually. In summary, adequate and proper
health
care
 enhances the quality of lives. It helps to reveal the status of patients in good time.
Thus
 providing the
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
 for
timeous
 response and referrals to facilities with the required experience personnels with professional expertise.

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