Do you think the government is right to stop people using mobile phones while driving?

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Using mobile phones while driving is
common but
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common, but
it is widely considered dangerous due to its potential for causing distracted driving and crashes.
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, some people think the government should control the number of cell phones using while driving. In my viewpoint, I agree with
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idea. The
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reason for
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is because a simulation study has provided strong evidence that both retrieving and,
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, sending text messages has a detrimental effect on several critical driving tasks.
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to voice calling, activities
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as texting while driving, web browsing, playing video games, or
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in general, can
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increase the risk of a crash.
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, using a hands-free cellular device is not safer than using a handheld cell
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, as concluded by case-crossover studies,
epidemiological
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, simulation, and meta-analysis. The increased cognitive workload involved in holding a conversation, not the
use
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of hands, causes the increased risk.
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, a study found that merely listening to somebody speak on a
phone
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caused a 37% drop in activity in the parietal lobe, where spatial tasks are managed.
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, mobile
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use
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while driving has economic impacts as seen in those drivers can have economic costs
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as paying for
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the costs
of the collision, losing pay if late to work from distracted driving. More interesting,
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, is how a driver's mobile
phone
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use
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while driving can have external effects on both other drivers' safety and other drivers' economic property.
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, the negative consumption produced by mobile
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use
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while driving not only affects others on the road but
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causes economic inefficiencies. In summary, it is certainly right if the government has solutions to stem a tide of mobile phones and driving. The restriction of not only handheld
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phones, but
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hands-free ones will make a great benefit for many aspects of traffic security.
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