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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

#people #choices
To start
this
 topic, nowadays choices are more on everything unlike the olden days. The way people choosing their career are one of the best examples of how people have options for making it their
life
 better. A few years earlier, students had very less option to choose their higher study, most of the students had gone to either medical or engineering courses. It is not only the student's mistake,
however
 the institutions were offered these type of courses only. It was believed that, either one of the courses will give the opportunity to yield the jobs which was required to settle in the
life
. In
this
 era, the students have a plethora of opting to go with their career as the educational institutes are evolved to the level which they did not even expect. The institution provides specialization in each and every aspect of the education. The following stanza will show my real
life
 examples and situation where I got the choices to make my career as best.
For instance
, after my completion of the higher studies, I supposed to go college for my graduation. Everyone has their childhood dream, as I do. I was astonished with the opportunities in front of me. Particularly, there was a course at my college where it had dual major subjects. As part of my course, I had electronics and computer science, after I finished the course, either I can go to job in electrical side or the computer side. Else, I can go to post graduation on either side. To conclude
this
, I strongly agree the point where nowadays people have more options than the previous generations. From my
life
 example
also
, proves the same.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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