Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Between the former and present times, many changes have occurred. But should
this
mean that Linking Words
one
cannot benefit from the past as the current Use synonyms
life
is not related to it? Whilst some people think of Use synonyms
this
great gap as a big obstacle, others believe that both times are connected when it comes to Linking Words
mankind
lives. On the Change noun form
mankind's
one
hand, many argue that as we move forward in time, Use synonyms
life
varies significantly to the extent that Use synonyms
one
cannot learn Use synonyms
any
from the previous moments to improve the current living. Correct quantifier usage
apply
One
justification may be that the way of living is enormously different Use synonyms
due to
the various mindsets we have Linking Words
got
nowadays; more freedom Verb problem
apply
offered
that the society was deprived Add a missing verb
is offered
from
before. Change the preposition
of
For instance
, Linking Words
Correct article usage
apply
the
education and work for women Correct article usage
apply
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
has
been a Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Change the word
completely
complete
refused topic formerly, about zero per cent Replace the word
completely
Change preposition
of women
women
would have the opportunity to experience any Change preposition
of women
life
other than the Use synonyms
one
amongst the walls ofUse synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
their
her
Correct pronoun usage
their
parents'
or Correct your spelling
parents
Correct pronoun usage
their
her
husband's house. Correct pronoun usage
their
One
other obvious example, the widespread racism between black and white, when populations were evaluating each other meaninglessly according to the degree of Use synonyms
whitness
your skin is. For these reasons, some have the viewpoint that we have overcome the Correct your spelling
whiteness
dull
of the past and as it was only a miserable Replace the word
dullness
one
, it will not help us in our current Use synonyms
life
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, others argue that even with massive variations between both intervals, it remains that we are all Linking Words
same
human beings. We share the same basic needs and our preliminary ways of thinking are similar. Fresh magnificent technologies shall not help you during seeking Correct article usage
the same
for
Change preposition
apply
survivals
at critical moments, Fix the agreement mistake
survival
for example
, Linking Words
sitiuations
like drowning and how to remain as long alive as possible or how to ask for help at Correct your spelling
situations
such
times. The catastrophic effects of wars for both countries, regardless Linking Words
which
Change preposition
of which
one
Use synonyms
have
won, are only shown from the ones that already happened to prove to us that war comes Change the verb form
has
in
no Change preposition
with
postive
results Correct your spelling
positive
to
Change preposition
apply
any
. Correct quantifier usage
apply
As a consequence
, I am convinced that Linking Words
the
history is Correct article usage
apply
a
essential for everyone and we can learn much from it. To put it Change the article
apply
in other words
, living without having any clue of the past is like a baby depending on his mere memory, which is null. In conclusion, as time passes, mostly everything changes Linking Words
that
it seems as if the two time periods; the past and present, have never been on the same planet. but despite these major differences we are surrounded by, shall Correct word choice
and
this
mean that we cannot learn anything from the ones or the events which happened before usLinking Words
.
I believe that we ought to learn from the past to build a better constructive future.Change the punctuation
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