Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and govenment should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is
a fact that university
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fact that a university
can be a burden
in
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on
families' budgets, especially if they are very strict. The idea of making these studies free for everybody can lead to two different
way
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ways
of thought. Some people claim that
istruction
a message describing how something is to be done
instruction
should be completely accessible to all,
instead
others believe that the access to the studies should be
easied
employed in accomplishing something
used
only in case of
good profit
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a good profit
good profits
. On the one hand, making the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
pay for all the university tuition fees would incredibly ease less economically stable families in continuing the studies of the youngsters.
Also
, there would be no more economical barriers to access to the best institutions, and education could really become a right.
Moreover
, students could
finally
choose the venue for their studies no more based on the economical revenue of the family, but focus only on their attitudes.
Last
but not least, there would be no more pressure for the student loans on the youngsters, indeed they could forget the problem of giving back the money. On the other side, it is clear that universities will not be able to accept everybody:
this
could lead to very selective admission tests, resulting in very
elitarian
having a useful function
utilitarian
schools. As a consequence
istruction
a message describing how something is to be done
instruction
would get very
hard but
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hard, but
rewarding, but create huge social gaps.
Nevertheless should
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Nevertheless, should
be considered the fact that rich people do not have problems in paying taxes, and it is often claimed that they should not
wheight
the vertical force exerted by a mass as a result of gravity
weight
weigh
weighed
more on the country budget. Another important fact to consider is that not paying taxes could lead to a lack of motivation, and longer times to finish
studies
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studying
. In conclusion, some people believe that government should cover the expenses for everybody, and
this
could be positive for
poorest
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the poorest
, while negative for
social aspects
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the social aspects
. In my
opinion there
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opinion, there
should be more balance and what could be done is lifting the threshold for
economical
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economic
aid.
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