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immigrants usually face language barrier when they migrate to a foreign country

Many people migrate to foreign countries in search of better work and living environments. Living in
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 countries where you have to use an entirely unknown
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 leads to difficulty in social and practical scenarios.
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 essay will argue that
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 there are many issues arising from the
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 barriers, these are not so serious that they cannot be resolved. In my opinion,
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 barriers may create many issues, these are not so serious that they cannot be resolved. The practice of shifting base to a new country is common amongst all classes of people. It is obvious that they will encounter problems when it comes to conversing with the local people and may
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 face similar issues at work. As they do not know how to speak the local dialect, their ability to socialise and perform various day to day activities will be hampered.
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, shopping in the vegetable market may seem a huge task.
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 living in
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 countries where
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 ought to speak the country’s native
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 is certainly is certainly going to be challenging at least in the
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 few months. There are multiple factors that
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 must consider prior to moving to a new land. The factors will help to cope up with the
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 barrier. Prior to moving to a foreign land,
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 must prepare oneself for what lies ahead.
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, before migrating to Germany, where the majority speaks German,
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 must get acquainted with the basics of the
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. In
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 age of the internet and online forums, learning a new
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 is easier than ever before. Taking help of
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’s own compatriots living abroad is another way to overcome
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 problem. In conclusion, I believe that the immigrants must learn the basics before moving to the particular country. From what has been discussed above the aforementioned issue is
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 a primary issue, but can be solved by communicating with local residents on a daily basis.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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