Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a contradiction view
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in the middle of
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the people in the current education system. Some people think that learning practical skills is not
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up to
the required standards when you compare from primary to
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. Some people
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have
a
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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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view that enough practical learning is carried out from the primary schools to
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current
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competitive
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to
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. More that two
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the
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adoption
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of first rank or importance or value; direct and immediate rather than secondary
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Education system
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The education system
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concentration on theory from learning facts. There is not enough required practical
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is giving to students. Students are not able to face the competitive world. The reason is student will memorise and doesn't have practical skills in
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implementing
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, research shows 70% of students are not capable of doing projects in real-time due to the lack of practical
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, there is
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required
of including more practical learning skills throughout primary to
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level
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people think, there
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are
enough practical skills from primary to
university
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level
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. Reason is conducting experiments in labs, these lab problems will help them to solve the problems. Education experts have clearly
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the
student
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student's
ability and included in the curriculum.
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, from primary to
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students will conduct more than 300 experiments and will the external practical exam
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enhance
the practical learning is
happenning
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happening
from primary to
univeristy
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university
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of enough practical skills learned from
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of first rank or importance or value; direct and immediate rather than secondary
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to
university
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level
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has a flawed understanding of the education system and they have less
knowledge
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knowledge
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of the competitive world. In my opinion, I completely agree with the
statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
that practical learning skills is not enough and should be increased in the curriculum.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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