A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter: describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about your establishment’s exterior. Recently there had been made a few adjustments outside of your cafe, which
lead
to difficulties for local residents.
I couldn't help but notice that your diner has expanded its dining area outside of the building. Unfortunately, new tables are blocking the sidewalk. Since the parking place is not usually busy or too occupied, it is safe for residents to walk around the cafe terrace, but it becomes an obstacle for those who have trouble walking. Wrong verb form
led
For example
, my neighbor
had a seizure a Change the spelling
neighbour
while
ago and had to teach himself how to walk all over again. For that
he used our neighborhood’s paved sidewalks and now with your Add a comma
that,
changes
he had to stop. We tried talking to your employees directly but our concern was put away. More disabled people came to complain and there have even been posters for Add a comma
changes,
this
issue but no one seems to notice our problem. The district pleas for attention to this
issue.
The ideal solution would be an expansion of the sidewalk,
so that both sides could share the zone. Remove the comma
apply
Therefore
you should consider contacting with
road works services for renovation. If that does not fit Change preposition
apply
in to
your budget, we hope that the tables will be moved from the pavement. I hope the matter will be resolved soon.
I look forward to receiving a prompt reply!Join the words
into
Submitted by oimigle on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
The letter effectively addresses the problem, explains personal impact, and suggests a resolution. Ensure the tone remains consistently polite and constructive throughout.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider introducing clearer paragraph breaks to separate and emphasize each part of the letter: description of the problem, impact, and suggested solutions.
Coherence and Cohesion
The logical structure is strong, with a clear introduction of the issue, explanation of its impact, and proposed solutions.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute positively to the tone of the letter.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph effectively concentrates on a single idea, enhancing readability and understanding.
Task Achievement
Achievements in addressing the task include a comprehensive explanation and a clear request for action.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,