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Write about a person who has had an important influence on you. Describe the person, explain how they influenced you, and why they have been important in your life.

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To start
this
 topic, every
person
 has an important
person
 in their
life
. There is a
person
 called Chandra, whom I admired more while I started my career. I will be explaining him, and the
way
 I got inspired by him in the following passages.
Firstly
, let me explain about him, his name is Chandrasekar, he completed his bachelor in computer science and working in the same company where I joined as a fresher after my graduation. Currently, he is my manager in the organization and there are 6 people are reported under him. He never fails me to inspire by the
way
 he works, not only in the technical stuff, but
also
 in the leadership qualities.
For example
, he guided me in everything like, how to go meeting in an effective
way
,
such
 as taking pen and notebooks, attending on time, etc. He navigates me in the right path in every situation by giving hard punishments. He was rude, but it is all for good to me.
For instance
, he is one of the notable people in my
life
, especially in my work
life
. The
way
 his work in the office, every day I used to get inspired.
Moreover
, I used to do the same
way
,
then
 understand how much I got influenced by him. To conclude, every
person
 will try to teach something,
however
 you need to pick up the right
person
 to influence you, so I took him as an inspiration in my work
life
. People get easily influenced by the others,
that is
 the nature of human tendency.

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