The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
The chart illustrates the total
minutes
that the British use
telephone Replace the word
used
call
between 1995 to 2002 in three types including the local - fixed line, the national and international - fixed line, and Change the form of the verb
calls
the
mobiles.
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apply
Overall
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
minutes
of
the local calls was more than the other two types all the periods Change preposition
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while
usage of the national and international, and the
mobiles were increasing.
The total Correct article usage
apply
minutes
of the
local calls increased from just over 70 Correct article usage
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billion
minutes
in 1995 to the
peak Correct article usage
a
at
90 Change preposition
of
billion
minutes
in 1999. Even if, it steadily dropped to slightly over 70 billion
minutes
in 2002 but its total call minutes
was
still more than the other two types during the periods.
The total call Correct subject-verb agreement
were
minutes
of the national and international started from just under 40 billion
minutes
in 1995 and steadily increased to just over 60 billion
minutes
in 2002. In the same way, the total call minutes
of mobiles slightly grow from under 10 billion
minutes
in 1995 to over 10 billion
minutes
in 1999 and it considerably increased to more than 40 billion
minutes
in 2002.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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