Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The issue of children’s health in recent days remains controversial. One of most remarkable factors that cause their higher level of unhealthiness is their unwholesome
lifestyle
. However
, while some people share the belief that children theirselves
have to deal with reflexive form of "them"
themselves
this
problem, I totally agree the idea both parents and schools take the responsibility for it. Some reasons supporting my opinion will be under indication with the scope of this
writing.
On one hand, parents are those who take main responsibility for children’s growth and maturity without a doubt. The first
reason for it is that parents’ ways of teaching their children have influence
on the young’s Suggestion
an influence
lifestyle
. For example
, some Vietnamese parents who regular
spend Suggestion
regularly
whole day
earning money tend to let their Suggestion
the whole day
a whole day
children
self-educate, self-grow. They just give the young some money for Suggestion
child's
entire day
and come to work. As a consequence, what they eat and drink Suggestion
the entire day
an entire day
everyday
can lead to their sickness. Even if that young people eat Suggestion
every day
unnutrient
food any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrient
such
as chese
, fat, sugar, junk food and alcohol is not prevented, unfortunately it can become their a solid food prepared from the pressed curd of milk
cheese
habbits
. The an established custom
habit
second
reason is that children’s activities are mirror of parents’ ones because the young usually have a tend to follow what adults do. A son
can follow his father to get drunk, a a short musical composition with words
song
daughther
can follow her mother’s staying up late. If adults do not take care of a female human offspring
daughter
theirselves
, their children will ignore health as well.
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their selves
On the other hand
, schools also
are in charge of dealing with this
problem. Firstly
, children easily get affected by their educative
environment. They are not old enough to know what is right and what is wrong. Suggestion
educational
For instance
, a boy can copy his bad friends to smoke, which leads him to some respiratory illnesses. Secondly
, regulations in schools have troubles. The time getting
started Suggestion
is getting
to get
first
period is too early for students to get to schools
on time. Suggestion
school
As a result
, students usually get drowsy in classes and do not focus on lessons. Not only does it have influence on their knowledge, but leads them to an unhealthiness
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unhealthy
lifestyle
.
To sum up, both parents and schools contribute to build children’s
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a children’s lifestyle
lifestyle
. Leading the young to wholesome
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a wholesome lifestyle
lifestyle
helps them not just to raise their awareness of health but shape their future life.Submitted by hannaneh.esfandyari on
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