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you order a wardrobe when it arrived one door was missing. write letter to company to replace it with new one

#wardrobe #door #company
Dear Sir I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the
wardrobe
 that I have bought from your prominent company. I purchased
wardrobe
 online on the 23rd July. About
wardrobe
 specification, it is wooden almirah, brown co
lor,
a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
double door and three shelves in it. I am excited about
wardrobe
 when I have placed
this
 order. Un
fortunately I g
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Unfortunately, I
ot di
ssapointed w
disappointingly unsuccessful
disappointed
hen It arrived. Ac
tually one d
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Actually, one
oor of
this
 particular item was mi
ssed.
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missing
It is hardly to imagine that irresponsibility in delivering al
mirah f
rom renowned company like yours. Now I would like to replace
this
 piece of furniture with ne
w one.
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new ones
a new one
the new one
It would be ki
nd act i
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a kind act
f you could send your staff to collect
this
wardrobe
 and exchange it with ne
w one.
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a new one
the new one
new ones
 Due to my hectic sc
hedule I w
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schedule, I
ill be av
ailabe f
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
rom
next
 week in the afternoon at home. I hope you would consider my situation and take prompt action against the involve employees. So that it will no be ha
ppen i
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happening
n the future. Y
ours fait
hfully Kiranprit Kaur
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