A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sasha, It is my pleasure to have a friend like you who can be helpful in needs and I would like to thank you from bottom of my heart for agreeing to take care of my pet and house in my absence. My
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best contact in case of any urgency and you can
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reach out to me via phone if in case of any concerns or questions. As you already know Jumbo is very friendly natured and in
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he likes your company too.Just make sure he gets his food on time or else you might see him going crazy with hungry and please take some time in a day for a quick walk with him, most probably evening will be ideal as you will be back from
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school. Now coming to the household things, please make sure you take the trash out from the house in the night and place it in front of the door before
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6:00Pm
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so that the community helpers can take it
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you might need to drive to trash collector on the end of the street to throw it. Once again thank you so much for the help and please feel free to reach me out on my phone if any questions or doubts. Your’s lovingly,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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