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Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability.

#everybody #admission #university #study #programs #level #ability
To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement? Give reasons for your
answer
Suggestion
Answer
 and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. I agree that everybody, no matter what his or her level of academic ability, should
be
a light strong brittle grey toxic bivalent metallic element
Be
 admitted to
university
 programs. In the
first
 place, everyone has the
right
 to an
education
Suggestion
Education
 and no one can take
this
 away.
Also
, people are generally attracted to educational programs that fit their interests and abilities.
Finally
, there are different
university
 program designed to fit different kind of people. Everybody has the
right
 to an
education
, and
this
 includes
education
 beyond high school. Some people choose to go to a
university
 while others choose some other form of training. No matter what form of
education
 a person chooses, no one else has the
right
 to make that choice for him or her. People tend to choose educational programs that fit their interests and abilities. They do not need someone else to tell them what they can and cannot do. If a person is interested in studying law,
for example
, it is probably because he or she feels it is something he or she likes and will do well at.
Also
, when students are interested in their program of study, they are motivated to work hard, even when some of the assignments are difficult for them. There are all different kinds of
university
 programs. There are programs that
suit different
Suggestion
To suit different
Suit different
 interests, goals, and abilities. Because of
this
, there is no reason to deny a
university
education
 to anyone. There is something for everyone who wants it at the
university
 level. Everyone has the
right
 to an
education
, including a
university
education
 if
that is
 what he or she chooses. It should not be denied to anyone.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • admission criteria
  • equal opportunities
  • higher education
  • institutional resources
  • merit-based
  • qualification devaluation
  • under-qualification
  • vocational training
  • inclusive education
  • diversity in academia
  • competitive edge
  • global economy
  • academic standards
  • universal access
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