Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

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many people are facing difficulties in maintaining a healthy
diet
.Due to the deficiency of
protiens
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
proteins
and minerals in
diet
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the diet
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humans are suffering from several diseases which may cause death in some cases.
This
essay will provide causes of
this
problem
and solutions to it. Primarily
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the
first
and foremost cause of
this
problem
is people are busy in
thier
of them or themselves
their
proffesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
works and do not have time to maintain a healthy
diet
.
Moreover
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due to lack of knowledge about
protiens
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
proteins
protons
preteens
and minerals
,
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,
people cannot select the
diet
which is good for
their
objective case of they
them
health
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
.
Additionally
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people are habituated to eat tasty
food
rather than
nutritous
of or providing nourishment
nutritious
food
.
Furthermore
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modern people do not know about traditional recipes which helps in maintaining a healthy body.
For instance
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,
food
prepared by our
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
will be more
nutritive
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Nutritive
when compared to the
food
cooked in restaurants and hotels. Secondarily
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humans will suffer from
plethora
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a plethora
of harmful diseases if they do not maintain
healthful
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a healthful diet
diet
.People will face diseases like obesity and
heartstrokes
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heart strokes
if they do not eat nourishing
food
.We can solve
this
problem
by making organizing awareness camps about selection of
food
in cities and villages.
Inaddition
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In addition
to that
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Law enforcement agency should ban dangerous restaurants which are preparing poisonous and unhealthy
food
.
Besides
this
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,
doctors should take
intiative
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
initiatives
and educate people about healthy
diet
in schools
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,
colleges
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,
and universities.
Consequently
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,
knowledge about healthy
diet
will spread and
majority
Suggestion
the majority
of people will
follow
Suggestion
Follow
a good
diet
. To recapitulate
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,
the main causes of difficulties in maintaining a healthy
diet
are, lack of knowledge about
nutritous
of or providing nourishment
nutritious
food
and people are habituated to eat delicious
food
rather than nutritive
food
.
This
problem
can be solved by prohibiting detrimental
food
places and making people aware about a
heathy
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
diet which
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diet, which
is rich in minerals and
protiens
any of a large group of nitrogenous organic compounds that are essential constituents of living cells; consist of polymers of amino acids; essential in the diet of animals for growth and for repair of tissues; can be obtained from meat and eggs and milk and legumes
proteins
.
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