With the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on environment? What can be done to solve the problem?

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Nowadays, travelling from one place to another is becoming rampant, either

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of consistent migration of people for various reasons or due to seeking of pleasure as well as for business purposes. The rise in the quantity of people travelling have resulted in the increased need for more flights.

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essay will examine the possible effects which

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can have on the

environment

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and discuss the probable solutions to it.

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, one of the problems associated with flights is its detrimental effects on the

environment

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End products

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The end products

of combustion from

aviation automobiles

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aviation, automobiles

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as fumes and chemicals are continually being emptied into the sea and oceans.

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Thus, as

Thus as

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, leads to air pollution and causes depletion of the ozone layer which can

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be a hazard, as global warming is imminent. A

study which

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study, which

was carried out recently revealed that chemical wastes generated from the aviation sector accounted for about 5% of the causes of water pollution which destroys the aquatic habitats.

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, there are lots of

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solutions

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. The

government

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should enact stricter laws to protect the

environment

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and make sure they are duly adhered to. Airlines that offend

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rule should be given a grave penalty to show

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government's commitment

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the government's commitment

. Individuals should

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support the actions of the

government

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by paying their dues and taxes. In conclusion, individuals, aviation industries, and

government

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, all have a role to play in protecting the

environment

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essay has discussed the effects of increased travelling rates on

nature

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the nature

and possible solutions to eliminate these harmful effects. It is recommended that people are encouraged to travel

lesser unless

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lesser, unless

it is really important in order to conserve our

environment

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

279 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Greenhouse gases
Global warming
Noise pollution
Wildlife disturbance
Resource depletion
Aviation industry
Air traffic congestion
Biodiversity
Habitat destruction
Carbon footprint

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With the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on environment? What can be done to solve the problem?

Fully explain your ideas

Do you agree that supermarkets are a threat to small shops and local communities?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.