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Now, people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes? What are the effects on individual and society?

#people #time #home #effects #society
Now a
days
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day
, people spend less
time
 at home.In
present world
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the present world
, everyone thinks about himself they run after the money to get luxurious life. At
one
 point
,
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,
where a person who is fond of spending
time
 with friends, pubs casinos e.
t
.
c
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C
 in order to get himself happy becoming far away from their family.There are different causes responsible for
this
 factor which are as follows. The
first
 main cause of
this
 problem is
workpressure
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work pressure
 or stress.Everyone is having work pressure in his job of some kind due to which he
feel
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feels
 stressed
,
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,
and when gets a weekend
break he
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break, he
 tries to enjoy himself in outdoors with friends and don'
t
 care about his family.If truly said, he
also
 considered family as a stress at
one
 point or another.
Secondly
,
communication gap
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the communication gap
 is the main cause of
this
 problem. Both husband and wife are working due to which both don'
t
 get
time
 to communicate each other and their distances becoming far and far
everyday
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every day
.
same
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Same
 when they get weekend break they tries to spend their quality
time
with
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to
 hang on with friends.
This
 problem
,
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,
cause a psychological
effects
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effect
 on individuals as they are suffering from depression problems
.
Accept space
.
If, a family is not happy how
one
 can think to be happy.
the
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The
 most important impact on society is social
distrubence
activity that is a malfunction, intrusion, or interruption
disturbances
 as cases of divorce rising day by day
,
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,
as a result
 the ecological balance in the society is not maintained.Kids whose parents are
seperated
being or feeling set or kept apart from others
separated
 have negative impact so
,
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,
at
one
 point they indulge themselves
at
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in
 some crimes or in doing some some offensive things. It is a well known saying that 'values
always comes
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always come
 from the family'. But in
present scenario
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the present scenario
, the meaning of family is totally changed.
Further
, It is concluded that
aif
introduces a conditional clause
if
 a person wants a prosperous
life it
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life, it
 is only possible if
,
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,
he has a happy family.If a family is
together
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together, then
then
 doesn'
t
 matter
wht
what thing
what
 kind of situation is
.
Accept space
.
I
Suggestion
It
t
 is better for everyone for maintaining a strong bonding
one
 should spend free
time
 at home
instead
 of giving importance to another.
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