Some people think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree? Include relevant examples from your own experience.

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It is being argued by some that paying employees based on
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is the ultimate means of inspiring hard
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. I disagree
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is the best
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, owing to the fact that it creates unethical behaviour amongst other things. Salary review, reward and recognition scheme as well as career
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in my opinion are better ways of motivating employees to
work
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hard. To start with, employees will put in effort to achieve great
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when they are aware of a career
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plan in place to ensure a long term sustainability rather than instant gratification
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as sales bonus.
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creates a win-win situation, they will
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hard to ensure the business
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attain success or reach a desired goal
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succeed
knowing their
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is dependent on it.
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, having a periodic salary review based on set performance index will encourage people to
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hard in anticipation of salary increment.
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, another
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to drive
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is having a scheme that takes into cognizance
employees
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employees'
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welfare, such
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as healthcare, transportation, insurance plan, annual leave and so on;
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creating a sense of belonging and stimulating diligence.
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, I have a health insurance scheme and I am assured I can access healthcare services as and when due. Another point to note is that hard
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can be triggered by having a reward and recognition program that acknowledges good performance.
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, a 'wall of fame' for outstanding employees will encourage people as everybody loves to be celebrated. In conclusion, admittedly, having payment equivalent to
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is one
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of  influencing hard
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,
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, I
disagree it
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disagree, it
is the best
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because it is short termed and results in sharp practises.
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, long term incentive
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plan, such
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as annual salary review, reward and recognition and career
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are better means of motivating and encourage hard
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in a workplace.

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • liberating
  • physical activity
  • chronic diseases
  • natural light
  • job satisfaction
  • environmental connection
  • monotonous
  • dynamic
  • stimulating
  • fulfilling career
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  • inspire
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