n some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

In the bygone days, irrespective of time people had freedom to commute in their nearby places or distant places even for a prolonged

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time

on foot or livestock due to lack of transport.

Likewise

, they were not afraid of any causalities and hard situations. Ultimately, as atmosphere at that time was safe and peaceful. Currently, some developed countries

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have put

restrictions on particular age of people to not to abandon accommodation after a constant time

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as in

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the U

.S.A. In my

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the pragmatic approach initiated by the government of these fully developed countries. On the one hand, with the rise in

alarming rate

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the alarming rate

of crime, thefts, murders and shooting it is becoming

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a public issue

public issues

to safeguard the youth people from these social evils pervading in the society.

Firstly

, boycotting the toddlers after 9 p.

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will protect them from

such

heinous activities.

Besides

, it will assure parents a security of their children at home. Simultaneously

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worst

the worst

worse

culprits of the society are always in the fetch of new face to use for their benefit against society.

For instance

, many ISIS group members hack the confidential information of the users through their credit cards, social accounts and so on to make the situation worsen of the country and to take their revenge through installing bomb

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the human body of an influenced teenager. Moving the ball

further

, most of the young

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a person whose material wealth is valued at more than a million dollars

millionaires

in the regions of

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the united states

are affected by the drug addiction.

Moreover

, the greatest number of teenagers run out of their houses to join the clubs, parties and unethical activities.

Furthermore

, a large proportion of

teenager

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teenagers

the teenager

a teenager

dying

everyday

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every day

at a young age due to the

sucide

the act of killing yourself

suicide

suicidal

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over usage of drugs, teen girls pregnancy, alcohols, family pressure and so on.

Thus

,

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thus

the method emphasized to restrict the children to go out of their comfort zones while controlling their activities as well as scrutinizing them to keep them away from futile things.

Additionally

, the children are like

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clay, they

can be

molded

shaped to fit by or as if by altering the contours of a pliable mass (as by work or effort)

moulded

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anyway, as

they are of soft nature. Likely, they can be used by victims to take advantage of them and after that sentencing them to death.

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activities took place in western countries mostly. Where number of

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children

are

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covered with or as if with clothes or a wrap or cloak

wrapped

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kidnapped and used for the harmful acts. To pen down, taking into the consideration of the safety of juvenile with a rise of social evils persisting in the environment the banning of entry and exits is not only the appropriate steps towards their better future. Other things

such

as limitation on social accounts, ban

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alcohol and drug supply to youngsters and so on should

also

be taken into deliberation.