n some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?
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on foot or livestock due to lack of transport. Suggestion
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the pragmatic approach initiated by the government of these fully developed countries.
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the alarming rate
public issue
to safeguard the youth people from these social evils pervading in the society.Suggestion
a public issue
public issues
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the worst
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Moreover
, the greatest number of teenagers run out of their houses to join the clubs, parties and unethical activities.Linking Words
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teenagers
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a teenager
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the method emphasized to restrict the children to go out of their comfort zones while controlling their activities as well as scrutinizing them to keep them away from futile things. (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
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activities took place in western countries mostly. Where number of connects a noun with the preceding word
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covered with or as if with clothes or a wrap or cloak
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,
kidnapped and used for the harmful acts.
To pen down, taking into the consideration of the safety of juvenile with a rise of social evils persisting in the environment the banning of entry and exits is not only the appropriate steps towards their better future. Other things Accept space
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such
as limitation on social accounts, ban Linking Words
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alcohol and drug supply to youngsters and so on should Suggestion
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also
be taken into deliberation.Linking Words
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