Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility to university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is impossible for officials to recommend any admission or job in a well known
universities
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university
based on their financial status.
However
, I agree with the statement that
selection process
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the selection process
in
university
have
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has
certain rules and regulations to
follw
to travel behind, go after, come after
follow
according to their management. There are several steps are taken into consideration while doing
university admission process
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the university admission process
.
Firstly
,
university
seat is based on
twcnical
of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill
technical
skills and communication skills that are suitable
to
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for
the
university
education
. Because of
this
, universities are conducting competitive exams to know about capability of students that helps them to recruit students easily.
Secondly
, universities are trying to become popular
whre
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
when
they considering only
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
students who are responsible to better
reputation
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the reputation
of the college and make their parents proud too.
Furthermore
, owing to limited number of seats available in universities, which they select students who are
upto
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up to
the campus requirements and ideas.
For
instance most
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instance, most
higher institutions in Nigeria admit between 4000 and 10000 undergraduates annually.
Thus
, since both the rich and the poor are subjected to
this
quota system, no one is favoured.
Moreover
, it
provide
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provides
scholarships to the students who are from middle class families. Owing to all
this
, admissions in universities are only possible to those students who have matured skills in their
specialogy
in a special manner
specially
sociology
speciality
of
education
. Another important point is that, if universities allow any type of reservation, it may cause
severe effect
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severe effects
a severe effect
on
education system
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the education system
and it spoil the life of people who are having good skills and ideas.
As a result
, it leads to effect the development of
whole
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the whole education system
education
system by encouraging people to pay money
to
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for
the
ducation
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
which is not
afford
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afforded
to the poor families. To conclude, I reiterate my statement by saying that
education
should be based on skills and knowledge, not on money and wealth. I hope that
education
has equal rights to each and every person irrespective of their financial status.

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