Now a days, parents are allowing their children to use tablets and smartphones to enahance learning. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any example from your own knowledge and experience. Write atleast 250 words

Day-by-day technology has been developing rapidly on its own way.

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modern technology has been easily

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accessed

to the people living in the society.

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parents are encouraging their children to put interest on

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improving technology to reinforce their knowledge in studies. But these children show their interest not only on developing their skills but

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a large number

of unnecessary things. There are some advantages and some disadvantages on usage of these electronic gadgets.

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discussing about the advantages. Children can use tablets and smartphones to enhance their communication skills. These gadgets are not only a calling

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entertaining the children in education and in their stress relieve purposes. Children can get a chance through these electronic gadgets to learn their educational lectures. Even though there is a power of learning through

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but some children misuse their time and availability on unimportant things. On

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advantages, there

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few disadvantages. Children get more attracted to these gadgets rather than their physical activities. Excessive use of electronic devices

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causes

eyesight and radiation problem

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the children in the minor age itself. Sometimes these devices can kill thinking ability of the person to do

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. These massive usage of electronic gadgets can reduce the

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child's

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interaction ability with outside the world. All that being said, in my

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opinion, there

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benefit

benefits

of using smartphones than drawbacks.

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these smartphones increase

children knowledge

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a child's knowledge

child's knowledge

the child's knowledge

children's knowledge

, physical knowledge

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necessary for their growth. Children are to keep away from fascinating on these devices and spent some time in their athletics.