Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Friends are meant to be lifetime companions. We make friendships across all

stages our life

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stages in our life

, starting from kindergarten to college, from office to post retirement. Our

buddies

the entire structure of an organism (an animal, plant, or human being)

bodies

remains

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remain

with us in all moments of our life span.

However

, it is highly debatable whether one should choose friends having the same mindset as us or choose someone who does not be

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same page

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the same page

as yours in few occasions. I personally feel that we should make pals who does not align with us on every time but have different views in few occasions. Friends with same mindset seems easy going for some. I feel personalities having problem with acceptance of criticism should make friends having identical views.

Moreover

, people with less intentions of arguing or have confrontations issues tends to choose friends with similar thought process. I feel

this

seems perfect because a group with similar thinking will remain happy and strongly bonded since there should not be any sort of argument or serious debate that might affect individuals.

This

will

also

help in making a collective effort for the few occasions where team cohesion is needed.

Such

peaceful atmosphere won't be present if we make friends whose views differs from us on some occasions. Humans are not perfect and after parents if we listen or accept someone

that is

our friend. There will be instances where we might make mistakes and none but

such

pals will criticize us and help us to think and rectify ourselves.

For example

, if we make some important decisions we can consult my buddy having

different opinion

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different opinions

a different opinion

, which

further

helps me to think in more diverse ways.

This

advantage won't be available if we make friends with similar mindset. In conclusion, I must admit that buddies with other opinions at some point is most important.Doing

this

we can learn, rectify ourselves in our lifetime because improving yourselves constantly is the way of life.

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