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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Zoos represent both entertainment and educational place to go. Having zoos as important as museums. Museums are a showplace for art pieces that represent the culture of that country and zoos are show place for animals mainly belong to that country. Keeping wild animals could be a
safety
concern issue
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concern, issue
 for some people
,
Accept space
,
but with taking extra
safety
 precautions, the
problem
 will be solved. Zoos are often an attractive place for both citizens and visitors. All age groups are interested to visit zoos. Kids
in particular
 usually admired visiting zoos, they find it enjoyable to have a chance to see the animals and listen to the different sounds the animals can produce.
In addition
,
this
 is a good way to educate the kids about animals, their names, shapes and habitats.
Furthermore
, that can stimulate them
further
 to search and collect more information from the internet or books later on. Noteworthy to mention that zoos represent an attractive showplace for visitors to any country. In my opinion, having zoos is really valuable.
However
, a
safety
 concern is always raised regarding having wild animals in the zoos. There are many accidents have occurred in
many zoos worldwide
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the many zoos worldwide
. Exposure the visitors
to
Suggestion
of
 the danger of wild animals attack is definitely unacceptable.
Although
, it is a real danger, but with extensive
safety
 precautions
this
problem
 can be overcome. In conclusion, Despite the
safety
problem
 with having wild animals in zoos, The advantages of having zoos outweigh the risks.
In addition
, we have the ability to overcome that
problem
 with extra
safety
 precautions.
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