Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
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life
is the key to success. Many people Use synonyms
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that having a huge amount of Suggestion
believe
money
can make a Use synonyms
persons
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person's
life
filled with happiness. But is it really true that Use synonyms
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but
everything? We will discuss why obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
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money
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life
and what else is required to make someone feel happy.
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Firstly
, most of the people spend their entire Linking Words
life
to become successful and earn a Use synonyms
lumsum
amount to buy the things or assets of their need. Once they are able to do so, an Suggestion
indivual
feels the joy of owning a human being
individual
some thing
which they can an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
cheerish
with other family members or friends. Sometime it be fond of; be attached to
cherish
make
a Suggestion
makes
person
feel proud. For Use synonyms
intance
, a man or woman saves an occurrence of something
instance
money
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living
. Whenever they are able to reach the final goal, that moment gives them a Suggestion
a living
felling
of being secured under a roof permanently.
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
Moreover
, Linking Words
holdig
a lot the act of retaining something
holding
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money increase
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money, increase
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person
status for being recognized in the society among many others. A Suggestion
person's
person
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is always get
a special treatment and respect Suggestion
has always got
always gets
is always getting
has always gotten
by
the people, with whom they are Suggestion
from
surrounding
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surrounded
with in
every step, if the financial status is known to others. Similar scenarios can be seen with the Suggestion
with at
within
celebraties
and well-known businessman.
a widely known person
celebrities
celebrated
However
, Linking Words
their
are many other things which is not expensive or materialistic, but have the quality of keep a in or at that place
there
person
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life
energized. Family is Use synonyms
such
a thing. Linking Words
For example
, people sometimes become so busy with the passion of making currency, they convert Linking Words
themself
into a reflexive form of "them"
themselves
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money-making
machine. the act of making money (and accumulating wealth)
moneymaking
As a
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result they
forgot to spend quality time with family; and miss out all the day-to-day happiness.
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result, they
money
is an obvious thing Use synonyms
that is
required to buy and own the things from your wish list. But someone should not leave all the small happiness coming from every side while running behind Linking Words
money
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