In recent years,many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Now a

days

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day

, people prefer to shop from where it is

convinient

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

convenient

for them.

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, small vendors are struggling to grow their business and moving towards closing down the stores. In my

opinion it

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opinion, it

is a negative development which makes people

job less

not having a job

jobless

and

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it may affect tourism. One serious problem that can arise from the closure of the small shops is that the competition between the small shops and malls will disappear. Large shopping

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

gives

discount

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a discount

on products throughout the year to keep customers away from small vendors. So, if they are closed,

malls

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the malls

will

rise

raise the level or amount of something

raise

their prices and everything will be costly. Another issue is that many people will lose their jobs and become unemployed.

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, when the small shops

closes

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close

, people employed by them will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their source of income, and that will put them in a difficult situation.

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, many families run small shops to earn their living. When they go out of business, their families will struggle.

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, the

clousre

a grouping of a number of similar things

cluster

closure

of small shops might affect tourism. As tourists are attracted towards local market and shops as they can take a stroll on

streets

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the streets

and explore local culture and art. Reason behind

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is that they enjoy watching people working and dancing over the streets

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of spending time inside a large building of concrete. In my conclusion,

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it becomes easier for people to do shopping in one large

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

, the closure of small malls has brought too many problems for

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to be considered a positive development.