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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

#people #gadgets #phones #laptops
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 does not have confidence. The main reason behind
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 is that many
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 afraid about which kind of
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them.
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the same thing before your real test. So, check it out and prepare well. EXPECTED
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 FOR SEPTEMBER To DECEMBER 2019 Describe a good law in your country Talk about your favorite place for shopping Talk about a place where you would like to study Talk about a thing you complained about something Talk about a beautiful city Talk about a skill that takes a long
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 made with your hand for your friend Talk about the happiest situation in your life Describe a
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 when you searched for information from the internet Describe a
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 when you
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 gave you something you really wanted Talk about a recent activity that made you happy Describe something that helps you in concentration Describe a
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 when you had to change your plan Describe a memorable story told by
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 Describe something you did to help others Talk about an exciting book you read Talk about a situation where you had to be polite Describe a
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 when you were cheated Talk about an old person you met Describe a country in which you would like to work for a short
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 Describe a recent news you heard recently Talk about a public facility that improves local life quality Describe a
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 when you found something
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 lost Describe a
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • status symbol
  • financial burden
  • obsession
  • impulsive
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • e-waste
  • environmentally friendly
  • second-hand market
  • repairability
  • upgradability
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