Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in response to the post on your Instagram account which is about the vacancy of cashier in your

restaurant

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. I have been studying accountancy at the University of Finance for almost three years and I

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have some qualities,

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as communicating skills with clients, counting in my head quickly and other mental activities. I feel that I am the most suitable candidate for a reputable

restaurant

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like yours as I am a driven and ambitious person who is keen to learn new skills and experience. As seen from my major, I am good at maths and economics.

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why I consider myself to be an asset to your

restaurant

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. I would be ready to discuss the schedule and the system of working with you in person at any time should you wish to arrange a meeting. I promise that I will contribute to your own business by controlling and balancing the expenses of the

restaurant

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if I am selected for

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position. I really appreciate your time and consideration for

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application and look forward to hearing from you a positive response at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, David Bradley

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task achievement

Ensure you fully address all parts of the task. While you have mentioned your current status and suitability, you need to expand on your availability for an interview more specifically.

coherence cohesion

Improve the logical organization of your ideas by creating clearer connections between them and possibly using more cohesive devices.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

201 words

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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

Multinational companies have become increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this method?

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.