Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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immigration is considered to be a disease which spreads very rapidly
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On the other hand
, it has a major impact on our society. In especially India every
third
person wants to immigrate to other countries for
better life
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a better life
and facilities. There are many factors lead to immigration
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Furthermost, we are discussing each and every aspect of
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problems faced by the people like pollution
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vegetables and fruits are
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reaped
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high
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persons want to live a healthy life by going to other countries.
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Unemployment
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they bring up their kids and when they want to live with their children what they give them in return
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they moved to other places for getting the
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displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
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As a result
guardians at their old age left alone with no option left.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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