Some people think planning future is a waste of time and it is more important to focus on the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is much of a discussion going on,
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multiple social forums, about whether planning for
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future
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the future
is a waste of time or not. Personally, I agree with the stance and it is better to focus on the present rather than spending time in planning
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future
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the future
. Following are some of my reasons to justify that stance. As it was quoted impeccably in a movie; from my childhood, “Past
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was
yesterday, tomorrow is
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but today is a gift
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why it is called a present”.
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the present age, peoples’ worries are based upon two factors: one, the tension about how their
future
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will
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make a sweeping movement
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, how can they correct the mistakes of their pasts.
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, their inner-self gets caught up in a perplexed scenario where they completely forget about their present.
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is to say, that the joy of living in
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the present
is lost somewhere around us.
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, many individuals have suffered ill health mentally as well as physically.
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, planning about
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future
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the future
is not bad at all, but
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the worry thinking about it brings, is. Plans require
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the execution
and action and many among us fails to admit that. Plans about what to become, after spending a certain part of your life, are justifiable only to an extent, where an individual take responsibility to make small contributions everyday towards achieving that goal.
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, failure to achieve set goals, at any point in one’s journey, can be detrimental to
individual’s mental health
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an individual’s mental health
. As a matter of fact, hospital records have shown a colossal increase in patients with
deteriorated neurological condition
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the deteriorated neurological condition
deteriorated neurological conditions
a deteriorated neurological condition
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, it is vital to understand the importance of living in the present and
od
engage in
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whatever it is in your power to make your
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bright. To conclude my thoughts, I have strong faith in the benefits that comes
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from
with
living in
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the present
and strongly condemn the idea of worrying about the
future
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much.
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