Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In recent years, there has been a growing trend that people tend to buy things on the Internet.
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present both pros and cos, Linking Words
however
, in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, shopping online brings consumers some Linking Words
disadvatages
. the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
Initially
, since people are unable to touch or to see the products they want to buy in reality, it is always hard for them to examine the quality of these products. Linking Words
As a result
, they might purchase the items with poor quality. Linking Words
In addition
to that, as consumers do not feel happy with the items they had bought online, they tend to abandon these products or don't use them at all. Linking Words
This
is definitely a Linking Words
watse
of money. spend thoughtlessly; throw away
waste
Moreover
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buyings thing
on the Internet often makes people confused since there Suggestion
the buyings thing
buyings things
are
a great number of shops on the Internet. To be specific, buyers might see the same products in several shops, but the prices for these items can be very different, ranging from reasonable to Suggestion
is
prohibitedly
expensive price. Suggestion
Consequently
, they will not know which products they should purchase.
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On the other hand
, I am of opinion that shopping online brings people a number of benefits. Linking Words
First
, shopping online allows consumers to browse for products and checking prices between these online shopsLinking Words
.
In Accept space
.
this
way, people can make a better decision to buy what they like after taking prices, sizes and models into consideration. From my experience, I used to buy an elegant dress at virtual shop, which was cheaper compared to some shops near my houses.
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Second
, Linking Words
buyings
things on the Internet helps people save a great deal of time. Suggestion
buying
That is
to say, since people nowadays are often so caught up with work and study, shopping online is a wise choice which doesn't require them to Linking Words
go the the stores
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go to the stores
go the stores
.
With a click of mouse, they can buy the things they need and the shippers will deliver their products to customers as soon as possible.
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.
Third
, since there is a high demand of buying things online, many people can realize their dream of starting up their own business and achieve success in the long Linking Words
rub
a score in baseball made by a runner touching all four bases safely
run
This
can be seen as a positive trend because it creates good job opportunities for people and thereby help people to improve their income and well-being. Linking Words
This
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also
contributes to boosting the economy of a nation in Linking Words
generall
.
In conclusion, applying to all or most members of a category or group
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although
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buyings
things on the Internet exerts some adverse aspects, the advantages can justify these.Suggestion
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